I will freely admit, Chapter 10 was very different.
Brad thinking of watermelon to take his mind of Will moving on was humorous in its own way, but how many of us have suffered through it? I remember when my first boyfriend (and we were long distance) told me he slept with someone else. My heart was shattered glass. It only seemed natural. But he was my first, and I was head over heels. I think I was No. 17 for him. (We're still great friends, and he is over a thousand now; yes, that isn't a typo.)
Can anyone else relate to their heart being broken by a former love moving on from you?
And then there's that three-way. It's VERY rare that I write about sex with females. For good reason: I have zilcho experience in that department. But because I like to keep my stories grounded — and heterosexual sex is certainly out there — it's appropriate for it to make its way into a story now and then. Certainly, Corey is going to have to debate it in the next book.
The final line of the chapter (mirroring the Prince song title of the chapter) begs the question: How important is Keith going to be in Brad's life?
And has anyone experienced a situation like that?
Stay tuned.
"I will freely admit, Chapter 10 was very different."
ReplyDeleteYou think Tim?!
I hope you know that I have always been truthful with you. I am certainly no prude, and on occasion I will watch bi-sexual porn, but the three-some didn't do it for me. I am not sure why either. Ramona kind of turns me off? This was just a small bump in all that I have read from Timothy Lane.
- K
This is a wonderful story and I could feel the emotion and headache Brad is going through.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to more chapters as the story unfolds.
I have really enjoyed Brad's story, and look forward to reading more of it.
ReplyDeleteThanks for all you do, your talent and your friendship.