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Read Chapter 10 of Heart and Soul here.
Those with good memories or who simply looked at my timeline in the previous post knew this chapter was coming. We saw Emory's stroke in Chapter 21 of Laramie. At the time, I didn't necessarily know I was going to do a book with Emory, but since I did, not only did I have to include this, I think it is very important to the plot.
While there is erotica in my work, I write LOVE stories not just sex scenes. I'm sure many people will see the title of the chapter and think, "Well, that's not sexy." Nope. It's not. But the companionship between the two men should be. I felt this chapter really showed the depth of both characters and their relationship.
And look who's back? Lorenzo Barker. Readers might recall his introduction in Chapter 22 in Say Goodbye to Sparkleland. When I wrote that book, I knew I was going to make use of him.
For anyone who didn't think they would care for this chapter and wound up liking it, I hope you tell me. After writing so many lovemaking scenes, crafting these passages was different.
Showing affection, love and sex at ALL ages is pleasing to me. The young studs (well-hung, 6'5'', quarterbacks — yeah, they get their share of stories) make for easy j/o material, but I hope these senior men show authenticity.
Tell me.
Excellent chapter. Of course I shed some tears but I loved it.
ReplyDeletem.y.
The Emory hates Mitch now loves Mitch is nice.
ReplyDeleteTimothy, those readers who find the subject a turnoff haven't experienced life long enough. I thought your treatment of Emory's situation was heartwarmingly real and emotional--bringing tears to my eyes. Love your writing.
ReplyDeleteT.
Yes, this certainly was a ‘deep’ chapter, and I assume that it’s more poignant to those of us past a certain age. I know what it’s like to experience aging and all that accompanies it, yet I’ve been blessed with relatively good health and until smashing a hip from a bicycling accident several years ago, had never before been hospitalized.
ReplyDeleteI continue to be amazed by your writing expertise - you really are exceptionally talented.
J.N.
My biggest fear is having a stroke, more so than even cancer or dementia. Like Emory, it would be the loss of control. This chapter scared me a little but also gave me hope that anything can be overcome.
ReplyDeleteYou said, "I write LOVE stories, not just sex scenes." That is why I love your stories. Don't ever stop.
K.
You are writing a great story and dealing with issues that are very real in the lives of gay men of my age. I applaud you for doing so. I am 72 and I am experiencing many of my long-term friends dealing with health issues (not to mention those that have passed away).
ReplyDeleteThis is a story that is not in gay life stories, so again I thank you for writing it.
jh
Wow, so many true feelings happening in this chapter. Bravo, good sir.
ReplyDeleteI cannot but admire your tackling the difficult subject of failing (and recovered) health. Thus all I have to say is: many thanks, do keep going!
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I was looking forward to and dreading this chapter at the same time. I was so sad for Emory but I was also looking forward to more details of his recovery. I really am enjoying this story and I continue to love Emory and Don!
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