Chapter 21 is rather site specific. From the jokes about
Gayfoundland to the real settings of Las Vegas, Zion National Park and Bryce
Canyon, the fictional world of Jackson bend is left behind for real vacation destinations.
Click here to read Laramie, Chapter 21.
I have to admit that the whole skit about Gayfoundland makes
me chuckle. I could just picture a group of my friends enacting the same
scenario. Gay people can be a humorous bunch.
The vacation, however, has many rewards for me as an author.
As this is Book Six, I’ve never really had opportunities for the main
protagonists from all six books to have a lengthy passage where they are all
together. With Corey thrown into the mix, it was a fun bit to write.
I also liked using Mike in the dual narrative. I haven’t had
the opportunity to find his “voice” since the very first book, Extracurricular.
(Not familiar with it? Click here to go back to the very
beginning: Extracurricular, Chapter 1. I do hope to revise it one day.)
Mike was my original guy. The origins of all my writing date
back eons ago to when I just wanted to write a little erotic smut for the heck
of it (just for myself). The first two chapters — which I really don’t like — were
discovered during the pandemic. Stuck at home, I wrote another chapter, then
another. I learned to like Mike as his character developed. More importantly, I
liked the relationship that evolved between Mike and Trent. Who would have ever
thought I’d be working on a seventh and eighth book back then? Certainly not
me. It was writing that original story that I found the pleasure in crafting
characters I liked and situations where love entered the picture. The sexual
stuff was fine, but it took a quick back seat to the narrative of the
relationships.
But then there is the final act to Chapter 21. Why include
it, you might ask? I assume — at least hope — that I will eventually get to
Book Nine, which will be Emory’s book. This creates some foundation that will
be essential in his full story. Also, if everything is always hunky dory, then
the story gets a bit too syrupy. Since I am taking a particular interest in
Corey’s adolescence, I feel it is necessary for him — and all the characters — to
have to respond to the highs and lows in life. There’s more heart to the story
that way.
With such a multifaceted chapter — one that will have an impact on Laramie’s life (stay tuned) — I hope you found something to like about it.
As always a wonderful chapter! However….. the previous chapter left on a bit of a cliffhanger when Corey said his dad wouldn’t have been proud of him if he’d known about the night before…. Hmmmm….. what was that about?????
ReplyDeleteBy far one of your best chapters ever. “Men trip”
ReplyDeleteFantastic…Corey is growing so much.
I loved it! I love the story, the characters and the entire storyline. All the characters seem so alive through your writing!
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