Chapter 3 introduces the character of Freddy.
Click here to read Laramie, Chapter 3.
This is a heart-breaking chapter, as we feel the
circumstances of two people that are so right for each other, but the love is “not
to be.”
When I first wrote this chapter, it wasn’t necessarily my
intention to make Freddy a principal character, but even though they say
goodbye at the end of the chapter, we haven’t seen the end of Freddy just yet.
I don’t say that as a spoiler but as a point that oftentimes previous loves can
remain true friends in people’s lives. I am grateful that my first love is
still one of my closest friends. We text frequently each week.
Life can be cruel, so I tried to write that painful
unfairness into this chapter.
Three books ago, I had readers pleading for Lance and Trent
to get together. Lance was in a similar situation. Had Trent never walked into
Mike’s classroom, the two very well could have ended up together. Fate had other
plans.
I should point out something here that really separates Laramie
from the previous five books: specificity. When I began the first story, I didn’t
have any long-range plans to keep writing them (that’s for sure), but when I
opted to post it publicly, I realized I didn’t want a real city. Jackson Bend
became a convenience because I never wanted anyone to read my work and say “I live
there, and it isn’t like that at all.” Part of me regrets that, but I realize
it truly is of no consequence either way. By the time Coffee at 9 was
winding down and I knew I really wanted to do Laramie’s full story, I became
aware that it would make much more sense if I put actual years to chapters, so
people could follow along and file things away in context. With that, I made a
very specific reference (a movie) in Coffee at 9 that placed that book
in 2022. Once I opened that box, I needed to continue it with this story.
There are mentions of early iPhones, and when I placed a
year on the chapter, it astonished me that iPhones are still relatively young
in the grand scheme of things.
There is a serious drawback to putting actual dates on
things. I’m going to eventually pinpoint the present day. When writing the
Jackson Bend series, I wanted it to exist in its own fictional world. Now, with
it actually being in a calendar context, my plans of keeping it “timeless” is
fractured somewhat. I still don’t want to enter politics into the story, nor do
I want to make the global pandemic an intrusive plot point. Readers are going
to have to forgive me in that regard. It’s not like I wish to gloss over the reality
of so many tragic family circumstances the pandemic brought, but it just didn’t
move the plot as I desired, so perhaps this is more of a COVID-free multiverse
thing.
But back to Freddy. We’ll see him again. With each chapter,
we see new people shaping Laramie’s life. It makes the complete story
multifaceted. Freddy and Laramie weren’t just a hookup or “exploration.” They
formed a deep love, a real bond, that I wasn’t just going to let go.
Stay tuned.
Just finished this chapter with ugly tears. Life can be so hard.
ReplyDeleteG.
Very sad chapter but riveting nonetheless.
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear we’ll see Freddy again.
Dates in a storyline and pop culture references are a slippery slope. Nice but can keep things from being timeless.
So happy to hear no politics and no pandemic references. Too polarizing, and to me your writing is riveting entertainment and something we need.
T.G.
I had older brothers so there was always some skin showing around our house with shared bedrooms and later when I'd started hitting puberty, even some J/O with brothers, but never any touching or anything else. I was about 12 was when I realized I liked the male form best and probably would stay in that lane, but it was definitely a time when you kept that to yourself. I had a couple of buddies and one cousin around my age and it progressed to more with all three of them, one-on-one. First there was mutual J/O and I'll never forget the first time I felt someone else's hand on my junk! With my cousin and one of my buddies, we also progressed to mutual blow jobs which was a jolt, to say the least.
ReplyDeletePlease, post the next installment asap! Chapter three made for heartrending reading.
ReplyDeleteG.B.
Boring pedestrian story.
ReplyDeleteBoring pedestrian comment.
DeleteYou were not wrong; chapter 5 was so sad but unbelievably good. When you started the chapter at a funeral, I thought for sure his mother had died.
ReplyDeleteBANG….Phillip? Right out of left field.
You never fail to take me for a ride.