This chapter had a lot for Jakob to contend with. One thing
that is so rarely mentioned in such literature that you find on platforms like
this (or maybe I just don’t read enough) is peer pressure among the young.
Nowadays, it’s hard to find a television show or movie where
people kiss one another for a mere moment without them removing their clothes seconds later. Peer
pressure to have sex is drilled into young people at an early age. I remember
hiding that I was a virgin from coworkers, but it all came down to me not
wanting to be intimate with a woman — I wanted a guy! Simple exploration in high
school tripped me out, basically because neither of us talked about it. It may
sound preposterous for an author such as myself to say I have the greatest
respect for people who choose to wait until they feel the time is right for
them. That takes an unbelievable amount of courage, particularly to state it.
So many mistakes are made owing to peer pressure. It’s sad.
But there is more to this chapter. “28” has highs and lows,
with Dr. Owens and New Year’s Eve traditions being the extremes at both ends.
Click here to read Ascension: Jakob’s Ladder “28” [Chap.10].
As Jakob and Lance build a life together, ups and downs are
understandable. We are now in chapters that I can actually enjoy writing about
married characters. Perhaps readers who favor animalistic one night stands are
less than enthusiastic, but people with those tastes probably abandoned by work
ages ago. 😊 The original trilogy dealt with Mike and Trent
and Lance finding the right person to be with. I’m enjoying writing about
people in committed relationships.
It is my hope that those of you who have followed Jakob
through his entire journey are now enjoying the rewards. Two chapters remain
and the next one just may be my favorite. But I honestly believe you will be
glad you invested the time in following Jakob once you get to the end.
Peace.
OMG. Incredible chapter. You made the drinking struggle real. So hard when you get those feelings.
ReplyDeleteI just finished reading Chap. 10/"28," ... and I have to say it was really good. I take it that the next chapter might detail some of the play that is based on Jakob's earlier time as a young adult to where he is now?
ReplyDeleteMr. Donahue, wow, what a character. So he didn't like that Jakob (via Visions) had a photo displayed with two men about to be married? Frankly, if I were in Jakob's shoes, I would have told the guy that if he didn't like it, or if his clientele didn't like it, they could just ignore the store. It seems that Donahue wanted to try to intimidate Jakob into either closing down his shop or moving his shop ... both backfired on the guys since he was the one who moved. I would have let potential clients of his to not patronize his store as the man isn't into diversity.
D.
You enjoy writing about people in committed relationships but had the four have an orgy. I’m surprised you didn’t get hate mail for what was something beautiful.
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